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Monday, April 25, 2011
No One Rents 203 by Will Hose
What's the genre? What's the logline? What is it you like or don't like about this cover? Does it make you want to know more about the book? Does it make you want to BUY the book? Discuss.
I also think horror or thriller for this one. My only complaint is the white border. It gives it more of an amateurish feel to it. Also, I think the title should be centered on the cover.
I agree with the above posters and think the title is clear and self-explanatory with what the story is about.
This looks like a horror short story about a haunted room 203.
ReplyDeleteA fairly good cover. At first glance the angle of the scalpel was kind of hard to tell what it is.
Genre: horror.
ReplyDeleteLogline: Check in to room 203 and you will die.
I like that the genre is obvious and that the image gives a clear idea of what the story is about.
I'm not stuck on the title font or the white border.
I also think horror or thriller for this one. My only complaint is the white border. It gives it more of an amateurish feel to it. Also, I think the title should be centered on the cover.
ReplyDeleteI agree with the above posters and think the title is clear and self-explanatory with what the story is about.
I agree with the other posters that this is horror. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI also agree with @R.M. that the white border has to go. If you want to give it a border, how about just a thin, black line? (Just my 2 cents.)