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This one has been discussed over on the Kindleboards.It's erotica and part of a series. I love the photo. However, I do not like the papyrus typeface. It's difficult to read, and the "volume one losing control" is just kind of stuck on there at an angle.
I would have guessed erotica even if Robin had not said anything.Robin is also correct that the text does not work. It is way too hard to read in thumbnail. The text must pop off the screen for people to read
Yeah, what they said.
If I'm recalling correctly, the author said she had done this title in Powerpoint. That is just not the correct piece of software to use to do a cover page. IMO it would be worth this author's time to find someone to help her make her title match the awesomeness of the photo.