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I like the overall color scheme on this cover, but am not getting any tie in at all between the waterfall at top and the people at the bottom. Scriptina is one of my favorite typefaces, so I do like that. But at the very bottom, does that say "Tilling Passion Series Book 1?" Is that a typo? (caveat, I'm trying out monovision lenses and am having some focusing issues, so I could be seeing this wrong...)
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It does say Tilling Passion, Robin. Not sure what that means. Maybe some of the characters have a gardening fetish.
I don't get this cover at all. What does a waterfall have to do with "uncover the truth or die trying"? And how does THAT relate to a title like "Blind her with Bliss"? And what does that title mean.I know those don't exactly relate to reviewing the cover, but I honestly don't have a clue what the genre is or what the cover is trying to tell me.
I agree with everyone else that the waterfall is not doing anything to help the cover. I would make the lower cover bigger.Also there is way too much small text to read in thumbnail. I would suggest losing most of it and just pick one line to keep.