tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175053073870042983.post6529839783776022543..comments2024-03-28T02:34:23.183-07:00Comments on Cover Art Review: Target of Betrayal by Melissa OhnoutkaS.J. Harrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12947499917626378222noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175053073870042983.post-58131501060910286382012-02-02T16:11:14.918-08:002012-02-02T16:11:14.918-08:00These are great suggestions! Thanks so much! :)These are great suggestions! Thanks so much! :)Melissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12960493353454007017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175053073870042983.post-23356382761478263572012-02-02T08:32:48.752-08:002012-02-02T08:32:48.752-08:00I like the overall look of this cover, but why is ...I like the overall look of this cover, but why is the model's face covered by the shadow of a chain link fence? I don't see the fence anywhere nearby and I find it distracting. It was the first thing I noticed.<br /><br />Genre I'd guess to be mystery or suspense.Karen Duvallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01839711547501582977noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175053073870042983.post-72954464642324276262012-02-01T11:57:26.194-08:002012-02-01T11:57:26.194-08:00Overall I like the cover and it does give a nice p...Overall I like the cover and it does give a nice pulp fiction look. I'm just not carried away with her at all though; her head just kind of is there. I'd be tempted to do away with her and leave the rest, maybe making a pulp type treatment for the author name as well.<br /><br />I had no problem seeing the bullet hole as a bullet hole. I didn't even know there was lightning until Eric mentioned it however.Robinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14745547538571404846noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175053073870042983.post-48757025432811902902012-02-01T10:20:52.526-08:002012-02-01T10:20:52.526-08:00Over all this cover had a very good film noir look...Over all this cover had a very good film noir look to it but it also has a few issues.<br /><br />One is that the cover is very dark. Yes, this is the look, but a little brighter wouldn't hurt it.<br /><br />The road and clouds are good but because of the placement of the text the lightning strike is hidden from view. If possible I would move it to the edge to have more impact. <br /><br />The bullet hole I'm not sure works. When I first saw it in thumbnail I thought: "what is wrong with the moon." Might I suggest making it smaller and maybe adding a few more.<br /><br />I don't like the broken glass look across the women's face. Is it really needed?<br /><br />The bottom text is unreadable in thumbnail. It need something more to make it standout.Erichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882910901554365995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8175053073870042983.post-51499376850978035732012-02-01T10:16:10.318-08:002012-02-01T10:16:10.318-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Erichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11882910901554365995noreply@blogger.com